Jun 2, 2011

Marble Wall - A Poem

Marble Wall

Cracks start to appear
Within my marble wall
I gladly step aside
And let the pieces fall.

You gather them in your arms
And toss them to the sea
I relish in the moment
When you truly know me


2/6/2011
©Copyright SW 2011

14 comments:

  1. I love this. And I can relate :)

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  2. :) These posts keep reminding me I need to start writing again (though I was not much good at poetry - stories and scripts and such). I love reading them!

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  3. Thankyou for the awesome comments Mynx and Ruth :)

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  4. Kinda deep, but very well constructed and heart-felt.

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  5. Yes, I've been there. Well written and tugged at my memories. Thank you.

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  6. If I could snap over the interenet I would. Good stuff. :)

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  7. Poetess, Carole, Nubian and Paul, thank you for your lovely comments.

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  8. Sprite - completely off topic of course, but I remember you said you liked Kate Miller-Heidke. She has a new band - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rYFAs1Tgh0U&feature=player_embedded#at=180

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  9. Thanks Caren.

    Oh cool, thanks Ruth, I'll check it out..

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  10. I marked "cool" and I mean it. That is a really cool poem.

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  11. This is molto bene, Sprite:)
    Really like it and your new Zentangles. Buutifull.

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  12. Thank you Cheeseboy.

    Grazie mille Antos, Grazie mille.

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