Feb 4, 2011

Love is Left Expired

Love is left expired
Unheard whispered words
Flow by on a tireless wind
Carried to the ocean blue
Scattered upon the foamy waves
Left to drift the endless waters
Pulled by currents and tides
Until dashed upon the jaggered rocks
And left alone and unanswered

7th oct 2008

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9 comments:

  1. PoetessWugFebruary 5, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    WOW!!...Deep!

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  2. UnknownFebruary 5, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    Why doesn't blogger have a snapping option. Good stuff Sprite.

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  3. SymdaddyFebruary 5, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    I am impressed.

    Well done!

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  4. Carole ReidFebruary 5, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    I've been reading your blog since Average Girl's party and just realized I hadn't become a follower. Now I am. I look forward to reading more!

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  5. AlittlespriteFebruary 5, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    @Poetess I was going through some tough things at the time.

    @Paul Snapping? I don't know what you mean..

    @Symdaddy Thankyou :)

    @Carole Hi and welcome. Thanks for following :)

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  6. Antares CryptosFebruary 5, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    This is great. Anything you can't do?

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  7. Antares CryptosFebruary 5, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    Check your mail, will you?

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  8. AlittlespriteFebruary 5, 2011 at 8:29 PM

    @ Ant, pee standing up.
    checked and returned :)


    I'm thinking of putting it into a painting. What do you think?

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  9. Antares CryptosFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    Highly overrated :)

    Absolutely! Poems,paintings and illustrations go very well together. When I read it I had the visual image of Andersen's "Little mermaid". (The original, not the Disney version)

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